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雅思大作文引言段写作技巧详解

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  雅思大作文引言段写作技巧详解带给大家,想要写得好作文开头引言段,考生们不妨来参考学习一下吧,相信考生一定会从中大有收获。

  大作文文章段落主要由引言段+ 主体段+ 结论段构成,每一个大段落的写作都不容忽视。本文主要讲解的主要是引言段。

  引言段组成:开头句(背景句)+ 中心论点; 步骤:引入话题,同义转述,再根据写作任务表达中心论点。

  首先,我们来介绍引言段写作中背景句的写作方法,包括两个方面,一个是扩充背景句的方法,一个是Background 句型介绍,赶紧来学习学习吧。

  扩充背景句的方法:

  1). 追根溯源法。

  即从题目给出的话题中找出这个现象产生的原因来扩展背景句。这种方法适合大多数的话题,考生要尽量在考前做练习,这样在考试就可以得心应手了。

  请看下面的例子:

  There are social,medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones?

  这个题目中给出的话题是mobile phone,所以考生可以从它产生的原因来考虑,就是科技的繁荣,而科技的繁荣,手机的广泛使用是在20世纪末,这样背景句就有内容可写了。当然要通过相应的句型来写了。如… (time) witnessed …

  这个背景句就可以写成:The late 20th century witnessed the boom of science and technology,which gave rise to a series of technological innovations,including the mobile phone.

  再看一例:

  Nowadays,some universities offer students skills that assist them to find employment,but some people believe that the main function of a university should bide students with access to knowledge for its sake. What is your opinion?

  这个问题需要讨论大学是提供职业技能或知识。从传统的角度来看,大学是传授知识的场所,为什么教的技能,所以这里的考生也认为通过努力和彻底的搜索方法找到,我们当然可以认为是因为工作已经成为当今教育的目标之一,很多大学教授技巧。当然,它是根据句式,可以用来引导原因状语从句。

  参考:As job-hunting has become one of the main purposes of university education,the majority of the universities tend to offer vocational trainings to prepare the students for their future career.

  2). 重述法。

  即对关于这个话题的当前现状的重述。

  请看一例:

  Nowadays,people are facing more and more work-related stress. State the possible reasons for this phenomenon and make some recommendations about how tocombat it.

  本题的话题关于压力,那考生可从当前社会现象来考虑这个问题,考生不难想出当下对压力这一现象的情况,即很多人都在承受着或多或少的压力。可用it isgenerally believed that … 形式主语的句型。

  参考:It is generally believed that white-collar as well as blue-collars workers are suffering from psychological and physical stress stemming from work.

  3). 定义法。

  即通过对话题词的定义的介绍,这种方法有一定难度,考生需要有渊博的知识,才能做到对名词的解释,但对特别明显的词语,考生可借鉴这种方法。

  请看一例:

  The main purpose of public libraries is to provide books should not waste their limited resources and space on providing expensive hi-tech media such ascomputer software,videos and DVDs. To what extent do you agree or disagree withthis statement?

  Background 句型介绍:

  从以上的分析,我们发现在内容上是有方法了,不难从内容上找材料,可是如果句型积累不多的话,写出来的句子也是无法得到高分的,所以接下来,为大家介绍下常用的高分句型。

  1). It is generally believed、It is the case that …、It is apparent that … 等形式主语

  Eg It is generally believed that white-collar as well as blue-collar workers are suffering from psychological and physical stress stemming from work.

  2). It is … that …、It is … who … 强调句型

  Eg.It is the traditions in Beijing that attract many foreign tourists.

  下面是考官范文里的句子:

  It is the interaction of the two that shapes a person's personality and dictates how that personality develops.

  3). 时间引导的叙述句型

  Lately,the problem of unemployment has been brought to popular attention that governments at all levels place it on the agenda as the first matter.

  4). 状语前置

  下面是剑6的高分范文中的句子:

  In spite of this,the obvious benefits of computer skills for young children cannot be denied.

  Just like movie stars,they live extravagant lifestyles with huge houses and cars.

  接下来,我们介绍引言段的具体写作方法,可供参考。

  (一) 引人入胜思路:用一个比较有趣的话题先吊起考官的胃口,并吸引他们往下看。

  题目1:

  Many schools demand the students to wear uniforms. Some people think that such a practice can undermine their personality and individuality.

  范文:The issue of whether the practice of requiring students to wear school uniforms will affect their personality and individuality is of great interest to many people.

  备选:Be of great concern for many parents

  引起父母的关注

  Be of great importance to many scientists

  对科学家来说至关重要

  Be of great significance to both A and B

  对于A 和B 都是非常重要的

  题目2:人类如何定义和追求幸福,这样的问题引起公众广泛的争议。

  范文:The question of how human beings can define and pursue happiness is amatter of much contention among the general public .

  备选:The question of ___ has been widely debate in the world of politics.

  (二)、力排众议

  思路:先驳斥大众的某个普遍但却错误的观念,指出其与现实不符,然后提出自己的想法或正确想法,并在主体段列举各种理由、证据以及活生生和例子来论证。

  套路:Although it is + 副词+ 过去分词+ that…,this is...

  题目1:

  The older generations have very traditional ideas about the correct ways of life, thinking and behavior. However, some people think that these ideas are not helpful for the young generations to prepare for modern life.

  范文1:

  Although it is commonly believed that conventional views about a healthy lifestyle and proper conduct are no longer to young people’s needs today, this is actually not the case.

  题目2:越来越少人照看年老的亲属,而是把他们送到专业人士那边去。

  范文2:Although many people subscribe to the belief that their old relatives can be taken better care of in a nursing home, this is in fact a common misconception that we need to clear up. From my point of view, it is the younger family members who should really be responsible for looking after these old people during the rest of their lives.

  释义:

  ① 普遍认为…,但事实并非如下。Although it is commonly believed that, this is actually not the case.

  ② 许多人认同这样的观点…,但事实上这却是一种我们需要去澄清的普遍错误观念。Although many people subscribe to the belief that ..., this is in fact a common misconception that we need to clear up.

  ③ 大众观念认为?.,但是现实状况却远比这种观念复杂得多。Although conventional wisdom has it that, the reality of the situation is often far more complicated than that.

  释义:subscribe to 订阅、同意、预订conventional wisdom 大众观念

  (三)、放眼世界

  思路:从“时间”或“地点”的跨度着手,比如:过去怎么样?

  题目1:

  Some people support the development in agriculture, such as farming industry and the scientific creation of new types of fruit and vegetables. Others oppose this development. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

  范文:Recent decades have witnessed a major transformation in agricultural development, where industrial technologies are being employed and new varieties of crops are being created. Yet, opponents of this development have raised a number of difficult questions. From my opinion of views, this is a really complicated matter, and we need further investigations to understand the bigger picture.

  备选:Recent decades have witnessed an increase awareness of

  释义:understand the bigger picture 了解事物的全貌

  题目2:

  With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally, it isgenerally accepted that families today are not as close they used to be.

  范文2:

  Divorce and family breakdown were virtually unheard of just 100 years ago.Now, however , almost half of all marriages fail. This phenomenon is symptomatic of the growing distance between family members in modern society.

  (四)、兼收并蓄

  题目1:谁该为修路付费,个人还是政府?

  范文:Some people hold the opinion that the government should make more investments is expanding and improving road systems, whereas others who are not so convinced present the counter argument that it is the responsibility of the growing number of private car users to deal with the huge costs. In my opinion, both sides of the argument have their own reasons, and we need a detailed analysis to get to the root of this controversy.

  (五)、异军突起

  题目1:谈个人科技的发展与贫富差异。

  范文1:

  With the huge expansion of high technologies available to individuals, it is sometimes argued that economic and cultural gaps between the rich and poorare being further widened.

  题目2:淡大型超市和商场的急剧扩张。

  范文2:

  With the unprecedented explosion of large supermarkets and shopping malls, a lot of small local shops have quietly disappeared while the remaining ones are struggling for hopeless survival.

  释义:unprecedented explosion 前所未有的爆发

  范文3:

  With the continuous and gradual evolution of mass media, many serious crimes are now described in greater detail on newspapers, television and the Internet, raising considerable public concern over personal safety and social stability.

  范文4:

  With the mass extinction of endangered and rare species, many countries have taken harsh measures against illegal hunting, unregulated dumping of industrial waste and rampant destruction of their natural habitats by human developers.

  以上就是雅思大作文引言段写作技巧详解的详细介绍,考生多加练习,一定会取得进步。

 

 

 

 

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