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　　Some people hold the view that the best way of reducing crimes is to prolong the crime sentence. Others, however, think that there are better alternatives to reduce the crime rate. Discuss both sides and state your own opinion.

　　The rise of crime rate often goes with the rapid development of economy, which is especially true in today’s China. In combating crimes, people are thinking of different ways of solution, one of which is to prolong the penalty terms.

　　Proponents of this idea stress that increased penalty terms against crimes will effectively deter potential criminals, who would think twice or change their mind before any bold action if they consider the prolonged imprisonment might be inflicted on them. A recent national crime survey has revealed that about 70% of police officers complain that the “cost” for committing crimes is at a historically low level and that this may in some sense “encourage” bold and vicious actions.

　　However, many criminologists do not share this theory, criticizing this idea as “cowards’ solution”, and pointing out that it will threaten judicial fairness as well as arouse hatred in criminals so as to deteriorate the effects of crime sentences. They insist that more rational solutions be taken instead. Firstly, more efforts shall be made to publicize the present laws, so that every citizen is better aware of the consequences of breaking laws; secondly, more civil organizations can be set up to supervise and help investigate into crimes; thirdly, imprisoned criminals shall receive better education in practical skills with which they can make a decent living without committing crimes when they return home.

　　In my opinion, prolonging crime sentence is no sensible solution against the crime rate. Only by joining the efforts of the police and the society, establishing a fair and more harmonious social environment, can we effectively ensure our own security.

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