托福写作范文|关于作业的托福写作范文与解析

　　A or DA: Students can use their mobile phones to surf on the internet or listen to the music while doing their homework.

　　题型：应不应该

　　论点：让步

　　角度：利弊分析

　　开头：不能边写作业边用手机上网或听音乐 。（话题引入 +双方 /某方观点 +我的观点及过渡）

　　Our age witnesses that the mobile phone has undergone a tremendous change from a sign of wealth and social status to a life necessity. Also, the function of the mobile phone extends from basic voice communication to browsing websites and listening to music. Reportedly, nowadays quite a few students do their homework with music or Internet around by cellphones. As for me, the above-?﹎entioned practice is a real bad habit that should be avoided when it comes to doing homework. And my reasons and examples are as given below.（90 字）

　　中间段 1：听音乐和上网不利于集中精力完成作业 。（主题句 +说理论证 +细节例子）

　　Firstly, it is impossible for students to concentrate on their homework while they are doing something else at the same time. This is because homework usually demands a relatively quite place and preoccupation from the student. Conversely, if a student is doing homework and listening to music or surfing online as well, his or her attention is being torn apart and the efficiency of finishing homework must be affected. A good case in point is that when I am working on a mission such as preparing a presentation, I have to devote all of my attention on it and cannot afford any slight disturbance. If I randomly refresh my Weibo or Wechat on cellphone, my job would be bound to last for longer time. （124 字）

　　中间段 2：听音乐和上网损害健康 。（主题句 +说理论证 +细节例子）

　　Besides, distraction or multitasking is likely to harm students' health. Imagine a student, who is in the middle of doing homework, chooses his favorite music and has a glimpse of the latest news online from time to time. In that case, the student is dealing with several jobs simultaneously, just like a computer and this is what we called “multitasking”。 But according to a recent research, multitasking is somewhat increasing our mental burden and making the process a tiring and exhausted one. For instance, my neighbor, a woman who not only has to take care of her newborn baby but also should work to support the family, suffers from insomnia because of overstrain. （113 字）

　　让步： 边写作业边上网或听音乐对于一部分学生而言， 起到一个舒缓情绪 的作用。 但是 （打压） 潜意识还是有分心的作用， 其实， 比较好的舒缓情绪 是集中精力完成作业后听一曲轻音乐或古典音乐。

　　Admittedly, some students claim that listening to music or surfing online can be reducing the anxiety and tension while doing homework. But you never know, people's sub consciousness is actually distracted, which not only impairs the progress of work but also burdens their nerve. Hence, the real way to relax minds is to kick off your shoes and sit back with listening to a light or classic music when finishing the whole work rather than during the process.（78 字）

　　结尾：重申观点，归纳理由 /升华主题

　　To put it into a nutshell, students should be preoccupied with their homework without being disturbed by any other distractions. If you were a cellphone——maniac, next time when you are doing your homework, you would better try to lock your cellphone in the safe box and throw the key away.（50 字）