雅思小作文解析及范文:游戏销量对比
2024-05-30 11:25:39 来源:中国教育在线
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饼状图
The graphs below show information about electronic games in South Korea in 2003.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
题目来源:2021年4月24日大陆雅思小作文
题目大意
下面的图表显示了2003年韩国的游戏销量在不同性别和年龄的对比,以及不同游戏的销量。
高分范文示例
开始段 - 改写题目:
The three pie chars illustrate the information about electronic gamers and best-selling games in South Korea in 2003.
概述段:最受欢迎的年龄段、男性玩家多于女性、最受欢迎的游戏类型
Overall, electronic games were most popular with 18-to-35-year-old young people and the number of male game players was much larger than that of their female counterparts. Moreover, action games were the top-selling games of the year .
细节段-1:年龄和性别分别的人数占比
It is clear from the first diagram that people aged between 18 and 35 years old accounted for the largest proportion of total game players at 42%, followed by under-18s ( 35%) and over-35s (23%). The graph shows that gender-wise, males far outnumbered females, constituting the large majority (72%) of the total electronic game consumers.
细节段-2:不同类型的游戏销量占比描述
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